Looking at my crit of my Flash animation.

After displaying my animation on the projector this i the feedback I received:

Remove Black outline from ghosts.

Change my synchronized blinking.

Too much text.

Voice Over could possibly be a little too 'echoey'.

My animation could do with a few more animated flourishes to bring it to life a little more.

Move the ghosts to make them a little more scarier.

Make the box in which the text sits in a different colour for example an Opaque white.

Be sure to include a credits at the end of the animation.

These changes are easily done despite some being quite time consuming. I do however hope to have these done for tomorrow when I will be placing my animation on the server for other people to take home with them.

UPDATE: I have completed all the changes that came from my crit with the only exception of the voice over.